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Wow. Ron and Ginny need help, don't they? Well, Draco needs it more. I love the Fred/George mpreg. That's very rare. I hope you update again =D

glad Hermione is okay,and that Harry now knows the truth
and that Ron and Ginny is getting ready to go to prison
please up date soon so I can see what happens next.

want more.

Just finished reading the 1st 4 chapters, brilliant start, but please update soon, as for Ron and Ginny I hope Harry eventually comes back and deals with them

Sooo need chapter 5!!!

poor draco and harry, hope it gets better for them. Hope there will be more soon.

I so hope they kill ron and ginny!

great so far!

Hey there! i was just reading chapter 3 and checking if i already reviewed the first two chapters (coz i really love your story) when suddenly there was chapter 4! yay to more chapters! anyways... on to the review.
the third chapter was very well written - very vivid descriptions and intense emotions. it really draws the reader to empathize with draco's misery. i think its desperate how he clings to the very last thread of hopes of ever seeing harry again and that really gets across his misery and desperation, as well as love and trust for harry.
then comes chapter 4 where we finally get to see harry. in the last chapter, you foreshadowed hermione's absence from the picture without giving anything away. so the hermione-cursing incident was a surprising twist. i like the fact that you did not draw out those four long months and just came to the point where hermione wakes up. yet you did not lose points for that since the opening paragraphs in chapter 4 were really great. the reader can feel harry's confusion and sadness, apprehension and longing.
all in all. good job! hopefully harry gets to see draco real soon. hoping to read more of this story soon! thanks for sharing!

you have me crying into my key broad now.

poor him. im tearing up here!