rate_review Reviews

It's nice to see Lisa spruced up a bit - let's hope Professor Snape might start to have a bit of a heart now he's got a more pleasant visual to deal with!

I'm loving this story, though must admit you really should have given your OFC intense violet eyes and a range of stunning superpowers *wink*.

Still many questions to be answered - I await further illumination with bated breath...

ohhhhh plz i wanna read more =D

He's itching to see her model the clothes he bought her, especially the shoes, thongs,garter belts and stockings; that means he's starting to find her attractive as well as intelligent. Things are looking up for them both.

Chapter 3: Although I find it interesting that Snape is so incensed about having to be intimate with a Hufflepuff, I almost must agree with him that the combination is rather an oil and water situation. I still want to know who her husband is.

Hmm, compassion and a slipping green towel just might do the trick, especially if her backside looks good, too.

How is he going to

Aha, I think Snape's starting to come around to the Muggle - at least a marginal appreciation of her mind and her backside are a start. 'There might be a hope for amicable coerced fucking after all' - how funny. I liked how he was so stiff about going to buy new clothes, unable to say any more than 'They displease me'. Very Snapeish.

aaahhh!! nteresting story... a dont like this tipe of women....disgust me really... dont mind you but a would stop writting...

Did he take the Wolfsbane potion with him when he stormed out to see Dumbledore, or did Lupin have to go through the change without help? Really, Dumbledore should have asked Severus to give it to him when he brough the woman to the dungeons and then taken it to Lupin, since I really doubt that he would get enough of a break between the times when he has to 'keep her from going into convulsions' to deliver it himself..

But from what I see, 'Me thinks he doth protest too much'. I can already see that he is getting some kind of enjoyment out of her besides the sexual gratification. Soon I expect to see her realizing that she is gettig something from him besides relief from the curse.

Well, in his efforts to say something "romantic" he did check to see if he should try to appeal to her vanity or to her intellect. It's too bad his first guess was the wrong one.

this is starting to get good. I feel for her having to deal with someone who wants nothing real to do with her yet.

I'll bet! LOL! But is she really and truly a Muggle? Hmmm, knowing about wolfsbane - something a bit fishy there. And where's the child?

Lovely in-character Snape and this story has a multitude of possibilities! I like it a lot.