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November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a sad chapter. I think the miscarriage will have long reaching implications. Severus certainly will regret the loss and I know Trudy does, even if she doesn't admit it to him. I loved the description of her angst over his questions. He really does mean more to her than she is willing to admit. Great job.
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October 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, just read this - I'm happy to Britpick whenever you want; I didn't find anything that needed changing in this chapter though. I loved, "Chin up; no blubbering in the beef," - very Dumbledore!
I enjoyed the time-turner sex - I wonder if the time-turner will come in handy for other plot-driven purposes? Hmmm.
That was quite a mean trick of Hermione's as well - good on Trudy for setting her straight.
So Snape is going to test Trudy - I look forward to that. He is so exacting.
I enjoyed the time-turner sex - I wonder if the time-turner will come in handy for other plot-driven purposes? Hmmm.
That was quite a mean trick of Hermione's as well - good on Trudy for setting her straight.
So Snape is going to test Trudy - I look forward to that. He is so exacting.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another wonderful and intense chapter. I can't wait to find out how this will be resolved. I hope both these lonely people get what they deserve.
Poor Trudy. She had to deal with a cold-hearted man and now she has to deal with an emotionally distant one. I do feel for her.
Poor Trudy. She had to deal with a cold-hearted man and now she has to deal with an emotionally distant one. I do feel for her.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12: Is this the first time Trudy sees Snape
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, it had some great smut, some revelations about Severus, Trudy had a great put down for Hermione, and some hints that he cares much more about her than she knows or that he knows himself.
How are they going to deal with keeping the students from finding out that she's living in his rooms with him? Even the biggest dunderheads could put 2+2 together if they find that out. And once they figure that out it's just a short step until they figure out what goes on in the Potions closet. I hope you can keep it from them, I love the thrill of them being in there and using the time tuner so the can get it off while his class is clueless just outside the door. It reminds me of Chapter 13 in Vresna Ussep's 'Secretly Slytherin', the chapter was called 'Quickie in the Closet' and it's one of my all time favorite chapters in fan fic. This one has also become one of my all time favorite chapters.
How are they going to deal with keeping the students from finding out that she's living in his rooms with him? Even the biggest dunderheads could put 2+2 together if they find that out. And once they figure that out it's just a short step until they figure out what goes on in the Potions closet. I hope you can keep it from them, I love the thrill of them being in there and using the time tuner so the can get it off while his class is clueless just outside the door. It reminds me of Chapter 13 in Vresna Ussep's 'Secretly Slytherin', the chapter was called 'Quickie in the Closet' and it's one of my all time favorite chapters in fan fic. This one has also become one of my all time favorite chapters.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i feel like that whatever is going on hermione is going to know. She somehow manages to know everything.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh when are you going to update! I have been waiting forever. Whats going to happen to trudy? PLease update soon!
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11: I think I
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So what's happening to Trudy? Has the curse not really been lifted after all? Or is she just driven wild with desire by teh Sev?
Interesting corner-turn in the plot direction. Now they have to rescue Elizabeth, and somehow Snape and Trudy have to rub along (heh) together in the dungeons while they plot. Opportunities for limitless lashings of sexual tension there.
I really liked the passage that dealt with Snape introspecting on his sexual past, and I loved the use of the word 'dissatisfying' to describe his self-inflicted pleasures; it went beyond 'unsatisfying' and gave a perfect insight into the emptiness and self-loathing of his experiences.
Your version of Snape is by far my current favourite; I'd be happy if this story never ended.
Interesting corner-turn in the plot direction. Now they have to rescue Elizabeth, and somehow Snape and Trudy have to rub along (heh) together in the dungeons while they plot. Opportunities for limitless lashings of sexual tension there.
I really liked the passage that dealt with Snape introspecting on his sexual past, and I loved the use of the word 'dissatisfying' to describe his self-inflicted pleasures; it went beyond 'unsatisfying' and gave a perfect insight into the emptiness and self-loathing of his experiences.
Your version of Snape is by far my current favourite; I'd be happy if this story never ended.
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
(Chapter 11)
I'm dying of curiousity to know what Severus' plan is. It was both sad and slightly amusing to see Severus try everything rather than admit to himself that he has feelings for Trudy. Curious how Voldemort has lifted the curse, yet she's still feeling the effects. Can't wait to see how Severus rationalises her wanting him. Update soon please!
I'm dying of curiousity to know what Severus' plan is. It was both sad and slightly amusing to see Severus try everything rather than admit to himself that he has feelings for Trudy. Curious how Voldemort has lifted the curse, yet she's still feeling the effects. Can't wait to see how Severus rationalises her wanting him. Update soon please!