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Wow! I loved it! Will you write more?

Utopia! This is bloody brilliant! I LOVED it!

The song fitted into the story so well, it was so emotional and so realistic.

The MALFOY 2 ws adorable and i cannot wait to hear more from you!

wow what a cool story. kinda bittersweet but still ace. I do love Lumione fics and your stories are always good. I am looking forward to updates on your other fics once you get past the stress of uni. good luck!

Very good. I very much enjoyed this one. Great plot, and I liked the lyrics in it. 10/10

wow, that was so well, i'm not sure how to put it. some of it was definitely heartbreaking...the loss of hermione's identity, her sense of self, but at the same time so bittersweet in that the Malfoy's became her family, but not fully so as lucius is the only one who knows the truth. and for lucius, knowing that part of the reason she is now stuck as narcissa has him full of guilt. very bittersweet and yet written extremely well. the hopeless romantic in me calls for a happy ending where she could be herself, but i know that in this storyline thats impossible. beautifully written, utopia, hope to read more from you!!

What a difficult position to be in! To be loved, but not as yourself. To look in the mirror and see someone else looking back. To play a role for the rest of your life for the benefit of a family you have grown to care for and because you feel trapped. A very interesting read.

ohhh, I want for of this story. I really do, I loved it, maybe just a couple more chapters if you can. I really like the idea, and the plot. its really really good.