rate_review Reviews

Yes, continue this story. There are so many questions left unanswered. What will happen to Lucius and Hermione (Narcissa)? Will Arelius look like Hermione? How will it be explained? Will Draco ever find out?

i'd love a sequal....

I would love a sequel :) Either way, its a very nice story. Good job!

Yes. This story has so much potential, I always say Write to your full potential, and there is more to see in this story. It doesn't have to be a lot, just a firm statement as to if they win the battle, and whether or not the spell Snape does is completed or if Lucius talks her out of it. Or if Draco, and Harry ever figure it out. I just read this story and fell in love with the plot and would like to see a finalized ending.
Thanks

Two-shot definitely! Wonderful story!

So here is my vote: Thumbs up!
I was not sure at the beginning of the story. But as it moved on, I discovered, that it was quite different to the rest
Moine-Lucius-stories. He is rather tender, human, Draco is nicer, drawn to the new Narcissa and it would be a shame
if I won't be able to figure out, who wins the battle. So, is this enough reason?
Okay, here is another one: Being a newpaper journalist I'm often forced to write a story I feel detached from. However, sometimes
the readers discover things about it, that puzzle me afterwards and somehow it is awarding. But if you don't try, you'll never know.
Okay, I'm a bit selfish here.
Its a free world, take your choice.
Thanks anyways.
Greetings, Alex

Although i adore this story and would love to see another chapter, this is perfect within itself.

YES!!!!!!!!

I think there is alot more story to be explored...backwards onto how this all came about and the building of the relationship and forwards to a time after the battle and maybe discovering the secret....how would all react????

Hello,
This is really an interesting and original story idea, and it deserves to continue. I will not presume to tell you how I think that story might go, but even with the fall of Voldemort, there would be many things to be resolved with Draco, Aurelius (and how much do I love that name?!?) and her friends and past collegues. There is the making of a very good story that might be done in a few more chapters.
Excellent!

YES YES YES