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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, you made me late for work Damn it! I had to read this, my kids are standing by the door dancing back and forth ready to go to grandmas and Im sitting at my laptop reading!!
I loved it, what an interesting take on things! Permenantly polyjuiced eh? Well for Lucius it would be worth it. I love that song too, was one of my favorites for a long time.
Alright...off to work now LOL...late...good thing I dont report to anyone isnt it?
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SG
I loved it, what an interesting take on things! Permenantly polyjuiced eh? Well for Lucius it would be worth it. I love that song too, was one of my favorites for a long time.
Alright...off to work now LOL...late...good thing I dont report to anyone isnt it?
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SG
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really amazing !!! Great job on writing the story. It would be awesome if you would continue it. Like does the order win ?? Will hermione ever get her life back ??? What are Lucius's thoughts about hermione. Does he sometime forget it's her and still think of her as his deceased wife ???
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes I would like to see if she goes through with it. I want to know if someone finds out before she does it like Draco or one of her friends. I hope thats a good reason for you to do it.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'd actually like to see a 2nd part to this fic. perhaps if hermione can never be herself again we can see lucius forgive himself for putting her in that situation, i'm not sure what, but it seems as though its kind of unfinished without a second part. or perhaps a way for her to be herself with feasible explanations given to Draco and Aurelius (then again, draco never knew his mother died and narcissa is all aurelius knows so i don't see how that would be possible.) either way, i still think this was an awesome ficlet.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO... Unless you can plan the story before you write it... If not I think it can be the recipe of the famous writer block. For my part, I like the story the way it is.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No - I did ask if you would write more, but I read it again & changed my mind. She forgave him & I'm not sure how you could follow up without being too fluffy or horribly sad. Hermione did have a choice in this (not the kid part). She knew her death was faked & it would be quite hard to go back to being Hermione again. Anyway, these are just my thoughts & if you write more I'll obviously read it :)
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES! i really liked this one shot... it was very out of the mold... yes yes
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it is perfect where you left it because I don't think I could handle Hermione's inner misery. However, I would love to see you write a new Lucius/Hermione chaptered story. Now that I have discovered you, I intend to go and have a look at the stories you have already written which are displayed on your author's page.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-2: Ah, Narcissa