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twoshot - threeshot i dont care :D

as long as you continue it hehe n_n

Yes please - do continue. My reasons? Well firstly there's just so much material to work from in that one instalment...how could you resist? Might Hermione start to find herself drawn towards Draco having had an opportunity to see him minus the 'pureblood death eater in training' facade he wore all the time? Being in the guise of 'mummy' how might she need to struggle to hide any such attraction, and would Lucius be sensitive enough to his 'not really' wife's feelings to notice? Or if not that line then what about Hermione's right to her own and/or previous life (and the people who were significant in it...for example Harry, Ron & her parents) - there could be plenty of material for making Lucious (and that's a deliberate typo btw) jealous and insecure in there. But mostly I'd like you to continue the story for that fact that what I found missing in the piece as a one-shot was Hermione's voice...I have no real idea of where her emotions truly lie in all this. Yes there was a sense of her acceptance, duty and obligation but I sensed no real passion; be that a passionate need to hold onto her new life and family or the passionate desire to return to her true origins and regain her 'self'. You can't leave it like that...can you? *winks*

YES! I think it's just too good to stop. It's a VERY orginal plot.

Voted Yes!

Though Hermione forgave him, there are still so many unanswered questions. How will Hermione cope with being loved and adored but not as herself. Will she even be able to cope? Does someone else like one of her friends who weren't originally in the know find out before she goes ahead with the spell? Lucius is clearly falling in love with her, Draco loves her - yes he SEES her as his mother but he's seemed to have fallen in love with Hermione's personality. And Aurelius is still possibly young enough that the change might not be too upsetting. So many questions and so many possibilities.

If you do continue with this, I'd be really interested to see where it all goes. So I'm saying Yes and hope that it turns out to be majority ^_^

I would really like you to do another chapter! I really enjoy your style of writing, and you make LM/HG seem 'real'. They are not totatlly in love with each other right off the bat, they took time and it all seems real. Hears to another chapter!!!!!

YES please continue, the reason being that I want to see what would happen if there's a chance Severus can't make the spell permanent!

Definately a sequel!!! This is really good, but it doesn't seem complete. I know you said that Hermione was going to be 'Cissy forever, but things this big are bound to come out. What if Severus does the spell and something goes wrong? Or What if years down the road something happens to Draco like an illness or something and the sure fire way to save him is by using from 'Cissy like her blood or something. Any way you go about it,adding a second part would really inhance the fic. I can't wait to see what you do!!!

As to continuing, I vote NAY. I actually believe that this is by far the best story I have read from you here. An original plot, perfect dramatic arch, powerfully written and leaves a lot to the imagination (which I consider a great thing in a story, making me want to think beyond what is written). I don't think there is anything more you need to add. Well done.

Leave it as it is, it is a very sad, but beautiful story.

YES!!
I really like this story. This is a very orginial HG/LM fic, the Malfoys get the love they deserve :)

you did great!