rate_review Reviews

This is something I have waited for someone sane to write! You really embraced the characters and it was a cross between hot and adorable.

 

I'm not usually a fan of having RWHG get it on while in the middle of their hunt for the Horcruxes because it never felt like their first time should precede their first kiss. However, regardless of that, this was well written. I do think that HG would have hexed his balls off for trying to make her stay put, that's a bit creepy and off-putting to me, but I enjoyed the writing nevertheless.

This is my favorite Ron/Hermione one-shot :)

Okay, I don't know how you don't have a billion reviews for this already, but I wanted to tell you that I absolutely ADORED this story! This isn't usually my ship, and this is one of the first Ron/Hermione fics that hasn't sent me running in the other direction! Your characterizations are very good- very, very in character, and I can see this as being a totally believeable interlude in DH. GREAT JOB! =D