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Very nicely done! :::waves away steam:::

Dear Author: ah wooooo hooo! I doo hope you write what you seemed to be hinting at at the end of Doppelganger Redux!!!!! Two lovely, young Severuses, two!!!

ha ha. Two severus' instead of one. Yes, that sounds like fun. You are continuing with this, arent you??

Mrs_Helene_Snape: Girl, it is time for you to start posting to your account. NOW! This last piece was hot and wonderful and well-written. Much better than my first forays into fanfic. lol. If you like the young Sev/older Hermione scenario, by all means, write to it. I enjoy your writing . . . it's time to break out girl, although you are more than welcome to keep posting here. :)))) Wonderful story. AND you added luscious Lucius. Doesn't get much better than that.

liked these a lot. can we have doppelganger part 2?

Mrs_Helene_Snape: You know, I enjoy lemons as much as the next person, but what I really enjoy is a lemon or a lead up to lemons that has humor, sensitivity, tension, good dialogue and all those good things. In other words, the whole package. I think enjoyable fanfiction inspires us. When I say enjoyable, I don't necessarily mean deep, meaningful works, although they are enjoyable as well. I think accessible is a better word for it. I like clarity, simplicity, ideas expressed in simple, easy to understand language without too much extas and flowery language. I like to see the story, rather than see a writer trying to show how pretty and deep they write. I guess it's the poet in me. In the words of my creative writing teacher, "Keep it simple, stupid." Even the most convoluted ideas can be expressed in simple terms, thus making it available to everyone. You have this ability. Not to say work isn't needed. Hell, I need work too, and probably always will. lol. We all do. And we should all remember we do, that there's more to work at and perfection is only an ideal. It's never reached. I've had a couple of shots tonight, so please be a bit tolerant of the wordiness of my response. And now that I think about it, I can pinpoint the writer that inspired me the most to write my own stories. Her name is: LadyTalon. I believe, not sure, but believe the first real full length fanfic that I ever read that caught my imagination was one of hers, with Snape with an OC named Chloe. I could be wrong, but I hope I'm not. So, she takes all the blame really. There were PWP's but she is the author that stuck in my mind. I know there are those others considered gods and goddesses in this genre, but me . . . I still keep it simple and like what I like. You just keep writing. I hope to see you post something under your own name soon. Much love, girl. Ruth.

Ms_Figg
I appreciate your glowing reviews of my work. It means more to me than I can say. I have enjoyed your work for a long time, so naturally you've inspired me to put forth my best effort. I can only hope that my first attempt at a severus/hermione lemon was tasty enough for you and your readers.

I look forward to reading more of your spectacular work!

Mrs_Helene_Snape: I LOVED this!!! Well done. My eyes are full of tears from laughing. Hagrid in a bikini???? Naked Trelawney can-can???? ROFLMAO! I can't help thinking poor Severus has to have a callous on his forehead from all the head banging. A very, very hot and enjoyable read. You made his voice very much like Hermione's and definitely have a way with dialogue. And I enjoyed how you incorporated bits from "In an Alternate Universe" A job well done! Thank you for your contribution! ****

Good golly, Miss Molly, but this is an excellent set of one-shots in this very intriguing Alternate Universe. Kudos, Ms Figg, for setting this ball rolling!

Mrs_Helene_Snape: Ah, NICELY done! Mutual lust is always tantalizing. I enjoyed your contribution very much . . . very sexy. Of course, a lemon would have been nice . . . but it's your first time . . . so we'll all be gentle. lololol. Thank you so much for contributing. Oh, and I broke up your dialogue a bit so it would be easier to follow. Thanks again. ****