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for Don't Get Caught

by fbowden

person Jilliane
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Flic!

Wow. Dark, Flic, very dark, and disturbing, but...wow. I could feel Draco's rage, his seething. Scorpius and Al are the children between the adults, but I think it's maybe Al who's the victim. Draco is going after him for revenge, and even if Harry is doing the same with Scorpius, Scorpius is silently smug around Al, and relishes writing to his father while still freshly debauched from his and Harry's encounters. Not that that makes what Harry's done alright, but perhaps Scorpius isn't all that innocent. Of course, it may turn out that Al isn't either.....hmm........okay, no more speculation! Excellent writing as always, you DO know how to tell a story, dear Flic. Can't wait for the next installment! And thanks for making sure I don't miss anything!
person fbowden
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi Jilliane! No, this is a completely different universe to the Harry/Snape, and as you'll see, Harry is far, far different! I don't have an email list but I'll be updating this one fairly regularly and if I see you've missed something I@ll let you know,

Flic xx
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I'll be. This is an idea I would NEVER have thought of. It's almost like swapping son's for sex partners. I read the first chapter earlier this evening and was like, OH GOSH this looks so interesting. Now having read the second, I was a little concerned. I had high hopes of it mainly being about Harry and Scorpius for some reason, not necessarily about their love, but about how its a way for Harry to get back at Draco, and I didn't quite suspect Draco to stoop to that level. But, now that it's happened, I can see the direction this is taking more clearly and I am intrigued. It's looking like a great little story and I hope you continue. The fast updates are always appreciated especially when you're like me and frequent over here to see what's new every few hours between about 3pm and 3am. lol. Well, looking forward to an update, but no pressure.

Great work!
~gorgeousbowneyes
person Jilliane
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh my goodness!

Aren't you the naughty one, Flic! And isn't Scorpius a nasty little boy. And Harry...well, isn't he just very Snapish? That's exactly what I kept thinking as I read this, that it was like Snape and Harry all over again, except now it's Harry and Scorpius, and the fact that I don't know whether the Harry/Snape thing occurred in your story line. If that makes sense. Still, it was short, but well written (as always from you) and now I'm dying to see more, to see if Al finds out what his father is up to, so please update soon! Oh, and if you have a list for updates, please add me! jillianetpr@yahoo.com.
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it!