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for Don't Get Caught

by fbowden

person Jilliane
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM

That was touching and bittersweet and Oh! The angst!

Chapters like these are why you're one of my favourite authors. Flic. I love the angst, and you do it SO well. All the need, the want, the hunger...and you still manage to get Harry swearing revenge in there too. I can't wait to see what he plans for Draco. More, for the love of God, MORE!!!!

Soon please!
person Tesgura
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow Draco's a douche bag. I mean, if his son was happy, then he should have been happy for him but no, he just cares about it being Harry and he had to fuck it up along with his son's happiness, didn't he. I hope he gets what's coming to him, I really do.
person Jilliane
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow!! Great chapter!! I did not see that coming at all!!

I am SO loving this story! I really shouldn't be surprised, Draco is a Malfoy after all, and a Slytherin to boot. Great stuff! Can't wait to see what happens next. Will Harry plot revenge? Will Scorpius believe him? Up date SOON, please!
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I have never seen Harry in this venue, as the aggressor in a relationship with a younger man. I think it works well. It is a tribute to your ability that you are able to write a mostly narrative story and make it absolutely fascinating.
person Jilliane
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Oh-oh! You're right, this is twisty-turny, and this is a very nice twist. Can't wait to see what happens between these two. Will Draco taunt Harry? Will Harry admit he's glad it wasn't Scorpius....oh, but wait....you didn't say it wasn't Scorpius, did you? Hmmm...
Oh! Please hurry and update before I drive myself crazy!
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very very intriguing. Please continue with the next parts!
person luvhp
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I usually don't read much slash, but for some reason this one intrigued me. The first chapter was excellent, the second was devious, gotta love Draco. But the third left me WANTING!! How mean of you not to write about Draco and Al, although I can't blame you, the story is under Harry and Scorpius, but Draco is just so delectable I wanted to read about his exploits with Al. *sigh*
I'll keep my eyes open for more chapters :)
person Jilliane
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Well then!

That's what I get for speculating, isn't it! This is one of the things I love best about your stories, Flic, I never know what to expect next. So Harry really does have feelings for Scorpius. That's one hell of an internal struggle Harry is going through, hoping that it was his worst enemy who bedded his son rather than his own lover, who is also his son's best friend. The angst! And I DO love the angst! Great stuff, and can't wait for more!

Yay, Flic!!
person fbowden
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
luvhp - if you're on livejournal, I moderate a com called hp_cross_gen which has some really good Al/Draco stories :D

Jilliane - This story is pretty twisty turny, i know!! Nothing is straightforward where Malfoys and generational Potters are concerned :D

person Tesgura
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, why didn't he just apparate out to begin with? That is so gonna be awkward, I hope you update soon, I want to see what happens next!