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for Don't Get Caught

by fbowden

person twocanz
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant! I don't know if you're going to continue, but I hope you at least write another Harry/Scorpius(sp?) fic! You should ask AFF to put a Harry/Scorpius pairing in the listing so someone could get to this one and others quicker. I never thought of that pairing before, I was still trying to find proper Al/Scorpius stories, but that was sufficently hot! To bad about the ending, and that Draco basicallly destroyed his son's love life. No telling how this will affect Scorpius in future relationships. But question for you, were you insinuating with the last line about Scorpius' crush on Potter being inappropriate and he'll get over it, he's being a Malfoy after all, meaning that Draco had had a crush on Harry or maybe felt something for Al?
Anyway, great story! If it hadn't been for SoftObsidian74 having this in her recommended reading list, I would have never found it!
person twocanz
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Spoke to soon, sorry! I thought the 5th chapter was the end! Loved the ending. How very sweet. Wished there was a little more written on Ginny's reaction. Not that I dislike her just that I love anyone that could take Harry away from here, that's all!lol I verbally said 'ouch!' when Al told Harry he got the 'good one'. I felt sure he would suddenly confess that he's disappointed Harry took his crush away from him.
Anyway, great story! Thanks for writing it!
schedule August 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay happt ending! lol
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whew. for a second there, when Scorpius didn't turn up, I thought maybe Draco had killed him. Luckily there was a happy ending. *sighs happily*
person Jilliane
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM


Awwwww! *sniff* I do adore a happy ending! That was lovely!

I'll admit though, you did have me worried there for a minute. It was quite difficult to resist jumping ahead to make sure everything turned out well. I love it that Harry still loves James, and can understand his attitude. I loved the moment between Harry and Al, when Harry asked why Draco, and Al's reply, that Harry got the good one. I love it that Al and Lily stood by Harry. I love it that Scorpius loves Harry as much as Harry loves him, and of course, I loved the grand gesture of Harry's, giving up everything, his job, braving others' criticism, for the one he loves and a chance at happiness.

Yay! Bravo, Flic! :D

person Tesgura
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That is such the cute ending! It's too bad that James didn't accept it, but I guess everything couldn't be perfect. Great story and I loved the ending.
person Jilliane
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I'm glad that Harry actually cares for Scorpius, loves him, and isn't just using him, as Draco did Al. And what about Al?


I'm sure you'll let us know...

Update soon please!! :)
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG...I just read the first chapter, and I feel so dirty...that was hot man...I'm gonna read the read and then review....how old is Scorpius in this? I guess I'll find out. I can't believe you made Harry so dirty...and it's so fun...can't wait to read more!
person Tesgura
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Harry and Scorpius are finding a way around the law and around Draco more importantly. I'm so happy they'll be able to bond and be happy together now, and I can't wait to read more of this.
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww, that's sad.