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for Desperately

by AislingSiobhan

person Fate-Angel
schedule February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, the fluff was a good break from my calc book. I also love the LM/HP pairing, but so many of the stories are non-con, which gets old.

I also want to mention that 'atypical' means not typical. (used when talking about Draco not being romantic)

Keep writing your wonderful stories!
=^-^=
schedule January 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really sweet... =)
person ANON
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Isn't it so very sad when authors cant take criticism.
person Ithilwen
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Again very lovely!!! It suited the one before!
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You know, I get the same thing: anon flames. That just goes to show how stupid and dimwitted some individuals are.

Anyway, I loved it! I hope that you write another piece with Harry and Lucius' wedding. I loved the part when Severus fainted--that was absolutely classic. Hmm, I wonder if Severus was shocked by the fact that Lucius was kissing Harry in front of everyone or the fact that Lucius proposed before he could? I'm sure Remus gave Severus an ear full about being the only couple in the circle of their friends not married.

Excellent work! I'm sorry to say that I didn't review the first work of how it all got started and I should, as I've read that one as well or else I don't think that I would have understand what was going on in this one. I do hope you consider to writing a sequel. Again fabulous work!

Until next time...

Nemesis ^_~
person Cathy
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love both your stories "It must be love" and "Desperately". It's always refreshing to read a story where Harry isn't Dumbledore's puppy, but do what he wants. Especially when Lucius is the one to helps him. ;-) Keep up the good work.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaw that was so vute *.*
made me go all warm
and fuzzy inside :3
please write more ^^
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i likeit alot another part please i also like harry with long hair
person chineseartist
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
unfortunately, though i looked for it, I could not find the previous story "It must be love". did it somehow get deleted? if so, would you please repost it? if it's as good as this fic, I'd like to read it. thanks!
person jade
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you.