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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's a potion mix-up, why don't you have them going to Snape about it? He is the potions master after all. And I think, if Dumbledore was the one to ask for his help, he would, even though it's Harry. I'm not saying he could do anything, but I'm wondering why that wasn't one of the first suggestions that was made, especially by the adults.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter. I love the fact that you have Fred and George involved with trying to pet Harry and be close to him but you haven't pushed it too far too fast, with allowing Harry the time to mope about with his new predicament. I also laughed quite a bit at the image of dog Sirius chasing Harry up a tree of some sort when Sirius had the urge at the beginning. Very funny thoughts because of that! As far as constructive criticism it was fairly well written. I don't remember seeing any grammar or spelling errors that stood out to me while I was reading it. All in all it flowed rather smoothly and I enjoyed it quite a bit. The only thing I would say is that if you were trying to stay as in character as possible I believe Molly would be a little bit more temperamental towards Ginny at the moment. Other than that I have nothing to recommend, only that you continue to write and update as soon as possible because I check several times a day to see if you have updated and I always look forward for more. :D
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kitty! He'll need some twin loven! Can't wait to see more! Great job!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice Kitty!Harry story! On par with 'Hiss Me, Harry'. Keep up the good work!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes cat Harry is always good. You did not make Harry dramatic, girly or instantly fall in love with anybody, that tells me this is going to be a good one. Keep it up.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEEE!!!! how cute i love kitty harry. at first was a little interested in this now in stuck on it! please continue
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, can't wait for more.
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!!!! So happy to see that you updated!!! I have never read a CAT!Harry before. I find your story interesting. I f it wouldn't be to much trouble if you know any good CAT!Haryy stories would you please email the suggestions to Dragons_fly_free@yahoo.com, Thanx and please update soon!!!!!
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter