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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how cat Harry will will take to Umbridge. I hope you use the Quill dtention. I think it would be cool to see how the twins would react to it!!!
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha! Oh my god! My cat does the same thing! He'll lay there and just paw at me (cause he has no claws :( poor thing) That was hilarious! and the blinking thing was cute! ^.^ Thanks for updating!
person aniay
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me loves you to *glomps* I adore your Cat!Harry.. When he is acting jelous it's just cute. But twins comenting that he is to young to know what they mean with charlie is just mean, in a very twin-like way ;) And, Gracious Me! Do you plan to pair Charlie with Snape? That would be amazing.
Thx for Review anyway ^__^
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Though I don't know about the revenge thing. I'm not good with that kind of things. Oh well, update soon!!!
person jay
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter and story. About how long it took for him to get over it well all i have to say is this no one knew what would happen so it wasn't rape in my opion so i think the time frame was good.

schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg
why is ginny such a BITCH
update soon!
person cravedom
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes two weeks it rather quick to forgive somebody that druged you and then took advantage but really is is fanfiction and we would not want anything to get in the way or our smut. ;p

Now you promised revenge on the twins and that is going to be hard. I mean is the twins, they are shameless! The only thing I could imagine is something that causes their balls to disaper for a day, maybe their voices would be high pitch and everybody would be asking them what is wrong with their voices. It can not be a potion because Harry sucks at them but a hex would do it. The Hogwarts library has many books...
person kk
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay I got a mention! thanks :D
I think you handled it pretty well and I'm rather impressed. I like that Harry isn't mad for too long because he wanted it anyway and it was an unintentional violation of trust. You're right, it's an unrealistic timescale but it would have made the story too serious to have it otherwise, besides who wants to rain on a smut parade?
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Two weeks is a bit short, but then again they are Fred and George, and Harry loves them. When you love someone, no matter what they do to you, you cant help but forgive them. At least thats what I have seemed to notice. Nice update! thanks!
person Vittani
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter