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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person Kept In Spades
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! I hate the blood quill! I hope that kitty!Harry is smart enough to leave and tell someone like the Twins. :) and have the twins kill Umbitch. ;)
person wynja
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi you! I printed this story for a little night time reading, but I just got to get up and start the computer again when I read about fewer reviews! I REALLY hope they pick up, because this is one of the best cat-harry stories I have ever read... and DEFINATELY the best that is currently being updated... there is really only one other cat-fic I really love and that is "Cambiare por el migliore" on FF.net (don't know if you can post links here but if you can: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2468333/1/Cambiare_por_el_migliore )And that DOES have Lucius in it... I'm a sucker for that pairing... But the twins are absolutely adorable... allthough, I think they need to be a BIT more considerate towards Harry if they won't want their faces scratched... because soon they deserve it... YOu can't tease a pissed off cat like that.. *grins and glances at my own kittens*
Anyway, hope the revs picks up, because I NEED you to stay inspired so I can have more kitty-harry.... :o)
person Vittani
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey dont worry about numbers dropping off,it happens sometimes n then you get a second wind. Only thing i'd say is that the story is a little slow paced, it might be an idea to start adding in more action. you know like the lead up to your conclusion, bringing some stuff forward or something. Just a suggestion. I liked the chapter though, as you said harry was moody but that was due to voldie being in his head during book five, so brill job on keeping in character.
person mary
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still love it! I can't help but wonder what the twins are going to say when they see harry's hand. I hope there's some more harry/fred/george lovin in the next chapter...update soon!
person HarryVik
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh what will fred and george do when harry's getting hurt by umbridge? will harry even tell them?
person HarryVik
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh what will fred and george do when harry's getting hurt by umbridge? will harry even tell them? Can't wait for the next update.
person Vittani
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, Malfoys a prat, hope he gets his commupence.
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
man
i hate umbridge
AND STUPID MALFOY
what a prick
update soon!
person wynja
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just made my day, thank you for updating! I cn't wait to see if/how much Malfoy knows/will find out about Harry's little 'weaknesses', and, natyrally, if Voldemort will as well... so, even if this chap was "by the bokk" sort of speak, I hope the rest of the story will diverge from it more... or else we pretty much know what will happen, right? Well, I know you have something up your sleeve... ;o)As usual I can't wait for more... us bloody readers are never satisfied, are we...? *grin*
person Kept In Spades
schedule July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Ooo, but I hate Umbitch. Fred and George had better kill her for messing with their catboy. :)