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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person wynja
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeay! Two chapters! So ok, you should get your ass kickad a LITTLE bit for forgetting the mail-list, but, hey... two chapters at once kinda makes up for it somehow... ;o) THis was INTENSE! I loved the hotness AND Draco... Can't wait to see what happens... if Draco tells his father it might get really dangerous... but it dosen't matter, because right now Harry is so screwed... why do I like him tortured? Bad me! Please continue soon!
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter =] I just hope that Harry'll be alright. Please don't let him become TOO angsty lol And I just know that the twins are going to kick Malfoy's ass, right? Please say it will be so!
person HarryVik
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait is Draco after Harry??? No that can not be. Please let the twins take care of him please. DO not make harry have sex with draco. I can't stand this, please don't let us suffer anymore.
By the way are you going to go acording the whole book and the sixth and seventh book. Or have you thought about ending the war sooner. Please make Ginny pay. I love your work, you make me either hate or love the character.

Good day
person Anon
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohmygosh! Harry no!!!!! don't break up with the twins just because of malfoy! You stupid stupid kitty! This story is very stressful, update soon before I have some sort of panic attack...
person sexysarah
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, No! Please don't break them up! My heart would break with them! What if they bribe Malfoy with a Weasly and Potter sandwitch? I'm sure that they're smart enough to think of cockrings or something to keep it up in the presence of that arogant git... They just can't break up! *sniffle*
person Kept In Spades
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My Goodness Gracious!! Wow, sub!Harry is awesome and you did it so well! ^^

But please let the reign of idiot!Harry end and bring in smart!Harry who makes good choices and has lots of sex with F&G. Pretty please? With a cherry on top?
person HarryVik
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if it's going to be smut, like you said, will there be with both the twins or just one of them? Either way love your work and i can't wait for the Twins oncoming gag against Umbridge.
person Diane
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, not more stupid Harry. I was hoping this would be different when it comes to Harry. Keeping quiet about that was so wrong. *sigh* Sorry that your reviews have gone down. Oh, and you were worried about Harry being moody. I think that's very cat like of him so it's okay. NO on to the smut!
person AngelMary
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. Keep up the good work!
person AngelMary
schedule July 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I didn't notice how utterly ruthless the reviewers on FF.net can be. Keep your spirit up and just focus on your writing. I am truly enjoying reading this fic. Keep up the good work!