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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person wynja
schedule July 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaahhhhhhh! *runs around frantically* what will happen!? How will-?! And-?! ANd Draco-?! ANd - and-and *slaps myself* Okay.... I'm going to sit down and take some quiet time now... hopefully I have calmed down until the next chapter... this was nerve-wracking!
person Jan
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have mix feelings here!!! In one hand I am so freaking happy that their still together... but in the other I'm worry that Draco's going to do something stupid just to prove that he's a "true" Malfoy! I don't want the twins to go to Azkaban!

Please update chapter 21 soon ^_^

Jan
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww!
freaking malfoy!
god! can't he just accept that he's feeling guilty and- anyway
update soon!
person Vittani
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you know its scary, i cant make up my mind whether i want to read the next chapter or not. I can write realtionship angst but im no good at reading it. Gods, I hope they get it sorted out soon. I was nearly crying when he was telling them he didnt want to be with them.

I liked the human side you gave to Malfoy. Apart from in the very end. JK had it so tht any slytherin was evil and a voldie supporter. even snape who though a spy was still a bastard. I like this not so two-dimensional approach you have going much better. Its a lot more believable.
person michelle
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh gosh, i thought for a second there harry was going to go through with with it and that fred was going to be scary! i adore this story. thank you so much for sharing it with us!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo worried he was going to go through with it and break up with them, I skipped everything before the last few paragraphs because the suspense was killing me lol Great new chapter! And when the twins find out that this was Malfoy and Ginny's fault they'll make sure they both wish they'd never been born right? I hope so that'd be fun XD
person Kept In Spades
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, chocolate hearts... ^^

Yay, Harry did the right thing! :)
Draco has a heart? O.o I don't think so. He may be feeling slightly remorseful but he doesn't know it 'cuz remorse is an emotion and Malfoys don't feel any emotion other than pride and smug-iness. ;)

Haha, a world where Harry makes smart choices can only be an AU!
person maido
schedule July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, how could you, you're so cruel...! ;p Poor, little Harry, I hope he'll tell the twins about it so that they can deal with evil Malfoy, and it will be one hell of a revenge XD
And will they eventually notice about Umbridge's punishment - I think they should kiss the pain away or something;)
And one more thing, this confession scene was awesome^^
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! finally a sex scene, it's been a while...LOVE it! mmmmm harry is such a sexy little kitty. this is great, I know the idea isn't yours but the way you portray it is great.
person Vittani
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT. Gods Draco is so evil. And by the way that was the hottes fellatio (probably spelt it wrong) that i've ever read. I usually skip those bits n just get to the sex but that was hot.