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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person krys
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
REVENGE ON GINNY REVENGE ON GINNY!!! it needs anger and lotz n lotz of revenge and sadistic amusement in making her pay!!!!!!! ...sry i have a thing against her hate her! ne who i love it more more more more more!
person ur_new_best_friend
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love you! this story is the best i just...just argh it's so fanfuckingtastic it totally made my day.
person maido
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy, I just came back from m&a convention, and it was really tiring trip, and what a nice surprise welcoming me, a new chapter of Pretty Kitty^^ And such awesome a chapter it was! You end this whole Malfoy thing really well, I was so scared what they were going to do... Oh, and thanks for great lemon, again XD
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was NOT poorly written smut, it was very nice smut! I liked the vibrator and the fact that the twins put a sticking charm on it. Good job with Malfoy!
person HarryVik
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Love it. I'm so glad that the Draco problem worked out. I liked how you made the lemon scene, were both Fred and George's character was showing. I have notice that sometimes in chapter it specialise in either Fred or George, separate. but this time you made them interact with Harry together without dimming their character. I can only say that I'm glad to be your fan, and I'm also glad that I decide to read your first chapter of Pretty Kitty. I usually doesn't read incomplete fanfiction, mostly because I'm afraid of coming attachted to the story but sorry enough it never gets completed.

I hope to read more of your work and I hope you have a great day.

Bye for now.
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh the smut scene was brilliant. Great new chapter, i'm so glad Malfoy didn't do any permenant damage and twins are so cute with their protecting Harry. Hm...I just realized Harry never got the vibrator out did he?
person wynja
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chap! Didn't think Malfoy would be that easy to get rid off, but I have a feeling he will cause more trouble... that's just the ferret we know and love...
HA! Loved the egg! *grin* Go Twins! Oh, and you write VERY nice slashy bits, so do it a LOT *grin*
person Vittani
schedule August 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The smut definitely wasnt poorly written. And i am so glad the malfoy situation is resolved, i dont think i couldhave stood the tension anymore.
person HarryVik
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you but when will idiot!Harry go away? And when will Hermione give the potion for Harry's hand-scar? I like how you didn't make Harry leave the Twins. And Draco is almost guilty, hooray. I'm so happy that your not making draco become a evil maniac, it's enough with Ginny.

Bye for now and i hope to soon read your next update.
person dobeisme
schedule August 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gawd! I waited a couple weeks before checking up on this story, so that there would be a bit more to read, and there were liek four new chapters! I was like 'Yaaaay!!'

But then the twentieth chapter ended like that, there were no new chapters. I was like 'Noooooooooo! It can't be!'

But I can't wait for the next chapter. :O