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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person Sunago
schedule October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story. I love how you portrayed Harry and his relationship with George and Fred and his adorable kittiness. If you wouldn't mind could you put me on the list for getting updates?
Thanks for sharing this story and offering the update list.
Sunago
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nuh... So hot! Loved it!!!
person ashley
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot. Usually I'm not as effected by writing. but this chapter was wow. with your descriptions, i felt nearly as intensified as harry did. i got goosebumps, and the whole bit. excellent chapter.
person HarryVik
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your work. Can barely wait for the next chapter, have you thought about a smut scene in the Room of Requirement? I like your character, they are in every chapter taking more shape as the story goes on. Will Harry always be bottom, it's rare that he do something or take control in the sex, maybe it's because he still so inexperience.
Well, good luck and are waiting for the rest. Bye
person wynja
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is getting dangerously hot! I need to keep a bucket of water nearby from now on... *grin*
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is interesting to say the least. My only wish was that you would NOT hook Hermione up with Ron. The Hermione/Ron and Harry/Ginny parring that JK did always bugged me I would rather have Hermione be into other women than ron but you have written this story very well. Normally when I see anthing Ron Hermione happy together i usually stop reading but I just couldnt let this story go you have caught my attention. Keep up the good work and hopefullly update soon.
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person L.Y.
schedule October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't be insecure about the smut! It was hot.
person Elphaba
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me-Ow! That was hot. Can't wait to see what happens with Ginny next
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed the chapter can't wait for more.
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual!!!!!! And he'll finally get his collar back! Awwwww! Hurry up and post the next chapter! lol. Again, LUV the story. :)