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for Pretty Kitty

by CherryStarburst

person wynja
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
-lol- funny chapter! Poor Harry, but taking that candy was plain stupid, so I guess he deserved a third degree... ;o)
person Jessy
schedule December 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating life's been nutty lately and the chap made my day.
person Ani
schedule December 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE, MORE, MORE..... Am dying to get more.... So please update soon!!!!
person Jan
schedule December 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more we need more :D

Please update chapter 33 soon ^_^

Jan
person wynja
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Angsty, yes! The twins better get him talking soon... about Cho too... ;o)
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved the new chapter i feel sorry for harry well i'm hopping you get to the fluff soon since harry deserves to be happy and fluff full!
person sexysarah
schedule December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Excellent story, as always! Loving it! Be sure to take good care of your injury, you don't want it haunting you forever if it's avoidable! Feel better! -Sarah
person SweetSeme
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey...cant wait for the next chapter! and i'd like ot be added in the update log..as in when a update could ya send me an email?...thanks! btw, nit sure itf it shows up, but my email is: Thunderclan101@Yahoo.com
person SilverLion
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, though I noticed a few mistakes in later chapters. Several times, you had either Fred or George talking into Harry's human ears, when you said early on that they didn't work anymore. I hope you update soon and get everyone back on the right track. Because of Cho's mistake, Gred and Forge are mad with Harry. I hope that you can get them to understand her position, and the fact that she acknowledge's her mistake. I can't wait to see the Christmas gifts. Are you gonna include Lockhart and the Longbottoms in the part when they visit Arthur? BTW, I think Malfoy's actually jealous, though if it's of Harry or the Twins...who can say. I also think you should work in some MPreg (it'd add just one more thing to this potion mishap). On Gin...I'm not sure. I kinda want her to suffer, but I also kinda want to see her repentant. Obviously Molly and Arthur don't know about her actions, because Molly hasn't sent a Howler. Hope you update soon. Love SL.
person Elphaba
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Me0ow! I can't wait for everyone to find out the details!!