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for A More Worldly Man

by Lomonaaeren

person Mangacat
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear... as I can translate the spell quite nicely I have an idea what Narcissa plans to do with it, I'm just not sure what complications will come of it, especially since we're talking about Harry here.. sure he won't be able to throw it of right away, but I don't her plan will come to pass even remotely the way she wants it to. At the very least, even if they get Harry away from Draco he'll for one get suspicious and then won't come back to his parents either way. Nice try though!!
Cat
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
holy fucking hell. I think I should wait until you post a few more chapters before reading again. THE SUSPENSE D:
schedule June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hermione sure knows how to use what she has to get what she wants. But what did Narcissa do to Harry?! I just knew that whole no one is allowed in wasn't going to work *rolls eyes* Nice chapter. I hope one day that the Malfoy's will understand the error of their ways...but I doubt it.
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 11! Will the whole story come out now? Will Harry lose his wand? What happens now?
person Mangacat
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.. I knew the clean up after Daphne was going way to smoothly even with the memories and Malfoys for it to be over.. but I didn't even fanthom they want to reclassify Harry. Well, problem is, even if he wins the trial, there is still the news out in the open which could cause considerable problems. Let's see how the dream team deals with it. Just a pity that you deprived Harry of the MilliMione-Meeting!!
Cat
person Yume111
schedule May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So for the next twist..
Poor guys, don
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! The Malfoy's have definitely gone too far! I wonder how Draco Hermione and Millicent will handle this!? I cant wait for the next update! Btw....that scene was both too cute and entirely sexy! Cant wait for more of those!
person Graballz
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I find it really ironic that in both of your major WIPs (this one and "Guard") Draco is at odds with his parents, and yet, both have completely separate context, dialogue, emotions, feelings, etc. Amazing! Just another testament to what an AWESOME writer you are! Keep it up!
person SP777
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #10...

I was wondering how long it would be before Hermione got back into the mix. Even
though I would have preferred that just Draco & Hermione work together, after
all, with Draco's cunning and Hermione's knowledge, they would be a force to be
reckoned with. Besides what can Millicent bring to the game?
person avihenda
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! This new law about magical beings makes me wonder where/how harry got the ability in the first place. hmmm... loved the chapter.