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for A More Worldly Man

by Lomonaaeren

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 14!!!
person Yume111
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another really great chapter.

Harry
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww...
person Mangacat
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap.. I was just about going to die from the tension seeping out around the scenes with Draco until that fricking Auror finally made his much overdue appearence. I knew Harry would only get out of it with help and DAMN is Narcissa going to be in trouble.. I think that stunt really cost them the charges against Harry.. aside from costing them Draco in many more ways than one.. but he wouldn't have come back anyway, what I really pity is her inability to understand his motives or she would have realized it long ago...
Cat
person Dezra
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I left my computer and internet for almost 3 months and came back to this great story. I hope that Narcissa gets what's coming to her. it's now 2 in the morning because I couldn't stop reading. Another great story. I get so caught up in your stories. I hope that Harry gets out of this mess intact. Will that man's testimony work?
person avihenda
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter :-)
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAH! Failure! :P good try Malfoy's but Harry's love was stronger! ^,^ But Harry did try didn't he...to make it work between Draco and his parents. That was sweet of him...despite the fact that she nearly broke him! Thanks for updating! this chapter was so tense I was at the edge of my seat!! I was like nooooo Harry don't give in! Then I was like Hurry up Draco!!! So yeah...intense stuff...!
person SP777
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #11...

I'm going to assume you ARE going to tell us what 'Duco aeternum' means in
the next chapter.

Also, loved the mind games that was played here.
person Yume111
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter again.
This sounds very interesting, this new development with Littlesmith.

And I love those three together, they have quite a lot of chemistry going between them.
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person avihenda
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. cant waith to see where this is going!