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for A More Worldly Man

by Lomonaaeren

schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lucius...always so tactful isnt he? Thanks for updating hun! I missed you!
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4!!!
person SP777
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, tell me...what other weapons ARE there in the world that people can use?

I can only think of ''words, other people and money''.
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By the way, what direction are you thinking of going with this...and do you
have this story almost written out or do you write as you go
?
person Yume111
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How does Draco feel about his parents? He is angry, apparently, but at the beginning of the chapter he sounds as if he secretly wished they would be able to reconcile (with them accepting him 100%, of course). Is this what he actually feels or is he so angry with them that he doesn
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
gah how exciting, I can't wait for the next chapter! :]
If 'asshole' was a prerequisite to becoming minsiter [just like the others are/have been] then he's sure to win...
& narcissa is so desperate I'm wondering if she has hidden motives? [though your probably can't reveal them at this point :D]
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh ho ho! and the game continues! i hope Diggory gets his! And Im glad Draco stood up to his mum! ^^ Yay! Harry/Draco -1 Others -0
person avihenda
schedule April 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. But now I have to go back and see what harry learned that he didn't tell draco. :-)
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 3!!! Harry looked into his mind? Does Narcissa know everything Daphne did or just what Harry did to Daphne?
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh im happy now!!
person TheCoven
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Everytime I think I have just some of it figured out you throw me through another loop. And I see you carried the infuriating cliffhangers over. Lol, I guess I can't be mad as they'll keep me coming back to check for updates. So Narcissa is in the picture. I'm sure she's heard that the shop collapsed and thinks that maybe Draco will finally come to his senses and do what is expected of him. Oh, so many possiblities so little time.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com