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by Lomonaaeren

person Yume111
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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person MisstressNicole
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you have to hear me screaming. The wails of 'Nooooooo' are echoing off the walls here. For two reasons. One that was the worse cliffy you've left us so far. Two, becuase I can't believe they would do that to their own son. What the hell! I'd always had more faith in them then that. Well, in Narcissa atleast. Nooooooooo. I'd been two chapters behind in this story and when I got to the end of the chapter for 'The Malfoy's Party' I couldn't wait to click 'next chapter' only to find that I was shit out of luck. How will Draco react to having his torture aired for all to see? Noooooooooo. I want to huggle him soo much.... NOoooooooooo. HOw witll the other company react to seeing what Harry can do?! How will Harry react seeing how they react? Noooooooooooo. Ahhhhhhh. I can't believe you did this to me. I'm so confused and baffled. I want to know what happens but I don't want to know in case it's bad. But I know now that I'll be checking for an update everyday. Damn it. I hate cliff hangers. Especially one of this capacity.

Nikki
person SParker
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #4...

Wow, I can honestly say I wouldn't have been able to keep up with the Malfoys, the
way they duel with words.

But, I see it's REALLY about to get nasty now, where does Lucious[sp?] get off
showing that? If it was me, I'd go for broke & damn the intelligent head games, I'd SHOW you how I feel.

By the way, this story has a political intrigue theme to it. Is that what you're
going for now? Very Tom Clancyish...
person Mangacat
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, crap, this is a mean game.. in a million years I wouldn't have thought that they could take that measure, even if it's particularly obvious. You still manage to surprise me, it's marvelous. And I like swimming on the waves you create *g* I wonder how the public will react to the entire scene and what Harry will do... hmmm, precarious!!
Cat
person raven
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 5!!! This is bad!!! What are they going to do?
person bunnicle
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh. oh, I so cannot believe they did that... no, wait, look who I'm talking about. Of course I can. I wonder how draco and harry will get out of this mess.
person avihenda
schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, dracos parents are idiots for showing the memories to everyone. I totally understand why draco hates them.
great chapter!
person Yume111
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that Harry has made up his mind, he is giving himself completely, because that
person avihenda
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great read :-) looking forward to the next chapter!