rate_review Reviews

Very well written. I don't usually read one-shots, but yours caught my attention. :)

Well written and dark. Bravo!

this is exquisite - a layered background of neurology and psychology on top of well-written S&M and smut.

Chapter 1 (one-shot): It is an interesting idea that Hermione's ultimate choice would be to live in order to have her chance at knowledge, learning, and being able to further the realm of knowledge, even though she does it in such a repressive atmosphere where her body has become merely an instrument for someone else's perverted pleasure.

Hermione has learned to make the most of the sadistic bent of her master, Lucius and it almost seems as though she has managed to make lemonade out of lemons as the old saying goes. It remains to be seen if her new life will continue to satisfy her enough to get past the horrific circumstances that she is willfully turning a blind eye to in order to survive. Is she the only one in her position? Seeing all the other women being accepted while she is not will probably someday lead to her finally giving up.

This was brilliant!

this is pretty dark stuff....disturbing yet somewhat erotic. I liked it...lol. Poor Harry, skewered on a stick? yikes...

Ok, I am known for being bad about not reviewing, I am trying to be better about it. Anyhow, while this is very dark, I liked it. (not a big harry fan so I generally enjoy reading about him being done away with, if ron goes too, well I am instantly in heaven)


You did a good job on it, hon. I always love Lucius the Dom. :)


SG

I really enoyed your story. Despite some tense problems, it was very well written and you were able to get your message across without to much craziness. I really enjoyed it and wished there were more.