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for Meant to Be

by jemlia

person Marti
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* Another fine ending to another fine story! I'll definitely keep an eye out for more of your stories now.

I honestly thought you were moving towards Jess getting pregnant while they were engaged at Hogwarts, but I'm glad that didn't happen. Too many stories *my own included!* have unexpected pregnancies, meeting again in the future, blah blah blah...Too cliche! I liked yours.

Mar
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story was soooo good. You're an excellent writer! I loved the scene where Teddy calls Jess 'mummy' for the first time.
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That part where Teddy's hissing and Remus says he better not be a Slytherin... I laughed for five minutes straight. I loooooved these updates. I love Teddy!
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Teddy is adorable. I love how he warmed to her right away. It makes up for the fact that he's the spawn of Tonks.
xD
person Marti
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaahhhhh tease! You posted the chapter twice! LOL....Darn Teddy, what timing! Hope he's not as clumsy as his mum

mar
person BabeCake
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just FYI you posted two chapter 16's. But thats ok I enjoyed reading it again. lol :D Keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter.

BabeCake
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. Jess is being stubborn. He may have to tie her up and just explain his past. I bet she'll feel horrible when she realize how much sad his past is.
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness... I'm so glad you killed off Tonks. LOL! Dunno why, but I never could stand her.
I can't wait for Jess and Teddy to meet. I hope he likes her.
person Marti
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhh!!! I love it!!! *Writes memo to self to read rest of your stories!*

Can't wait for more, thanks for the great story, yet again.

Marti
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love your version of Dumbledore. He's exactly how he should be. Remus is so cute! I love the way he treats Jess. Why aren't all men that caring and considerate all the time?
xD