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for Moonlight and Ice Prince

by windbell

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 7!!!
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Harry! I sooo need chapter 6!!!
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very interesting
schedule April 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I really wanted to read your story, because the plot sounds interessting, but your are in desperate need of a beta. There are so many mistakes I couldn't enjoy it. You've got whole words missing and that not just once. Maybe your not a native speaker (I'm not)or not so old yet, but you should get someone to look your chapters over bevor you publish them.

Bye
person NightLo
schedule April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...will Harry do something so that others' opinions about dark blood will change in order to piss off Draco to a greater extent? And also, in such situation, will Harry live safely?
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 4! I sooo hope this doesn't backfire!!! This could make them enemies!
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco! I sooo need chapter 3!!!
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 2! Draco forgot someone? Especially a dark blood family? Oh my! Can't wait for more!