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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's very sad that native English speakers can not write their own language. I do not speak English, yet I can see the many errors in your story. Are English and American schools bad? I see that many Americans are unable to write their own language. I would be very embarrassed if I were them.
I would be embarrassed if I were you.
I would be embarrassed if I were you.
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far! please email me when you update. drattie@comcast.net
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice updates! I can't wait to be able to continue reading!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
just a thought, darlin'. perhaps because harry is expecting something else of the potion, it will actually take the course of...harry wanting to find out how it feels? as he did with cane punishment, i mean? or perhaps it will be exactly as expected?
just curious is all...if you feel that is to reveal such a plot twist ;) quite all right if you want to keep secrets :D
just curious is all...if you feel that is to reveal such a plot twist ;) quite all right if you want to keep secrets :D
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I love this story! The idea sounds really awesome. I can't wait to read more!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh they are finally master and slave, cant wait to see how that turns out. I loved how Severus back talked to Dumbledore. Update again soon
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm aching for Harry...
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update
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is totaly fantastic. I'm already looking forward for the next chapter.
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting premise! Looking forward to seeing more!
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April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be a really interesting story. Great writing.
I really love your stories. All of them are really good.
update!
I really love your stories. All of them are really good.
update!