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for Bonds of Affection

by emilywaters

person qwerty
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is really amazing. I love this story.
Great chapter!!
update!
person Hambares
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huggles Harry. Poor little guy. I think Severus is starting to see. I think he is just as affected by the bond as Harry
person Anon
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that is pure angst. Delicious.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 5. Oh wow, I don't know why I expected Dumbledore to be more disapointed and upset with Harry..but I'm glad he was generally supportive...kinky bastard probably wants to see what will happen.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch 6. Damn Snape with all his rules! Wow, he's gonna be a harsh Master eh? I wonder if Harry is regretting his decision already....I think Harry makes him nervous and that's why he made him leave. I like that Harry moved in before the bond really emerges...it will make the progression much more interesting to watch.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 7...hmm..I see the slow insidious creep already..it's kinda fun trying figure out whether various things Harry is doing and saying are coming from him naturally or as a result of the bond. hmm. loved their interaction BTW, you're keeping them very much in character which makes this a lot more fun to read. I can't wait to see how Snape responds to the bond becoming more apparent. So sweet him taking Harry out shopping...and then to eat...so sad that Harry is used to not eating during the summers to the point where his body has trained him not to.
person MissMiki
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh this is so good!!! Please update soon :) though I am confused with what happened to Snape... psychological issues? psychosomatic like Hermione suggested?? I'm sure you'll explain it in due time!! :)
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@Ch. 8...oh...mmmm...Harry asking for a caning just to experience was just ...oh yeah. Poor thing. lol. So Snape is a sadist? Interesting...this is gonna be deep. So Snape has never had a pleasant or loving Master/slave relationship? I wonder if it will be different with Harry?
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ouch. I definitely prefer him yelling.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow... what is going on with Snape? and what does it have to do with Harry? Great chapter. Very intense. :)