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oh my god!!!!! and the last line in chapter twenty did so much for me... october is my favorite month and i always loved the smell that time of year, it made this whole story so much more personal, despite the overtones of snapes wrong doing

@Ch. 13...what the hell did Snape do to himself? OK whatever trance he is in is downright creepy. Yay for Harry for disobeying! It was sort of funny how Hermione was making things worst. I think it was so sweet how Harry was holding Snape's hand though it all. hmm..

@Ch. 14. Interesting plot development. I wonder what Snape agreed to when he was talking to Dumbledore....an Unforgiven? For betraying James and Lily? why is he not forgivable or redeemable, and why does he have to be in so much pain, worse than the Cruciatus? I can't wait to hear what that's all about. It's obvious the bond is growing stronger in Harry...sleeping at Snape's door even? and I think this was the first chapter where Snape even referred to Harry as slave...is the bond affecting him as well? Can't wait to see where this is leading to....

@Ch. 15. WOW!!! That was deep. I hadn't thought about the Dark Mark as a sign of a bond, but that's exactly what it is...you're so brilliant for using that in this way for this story. so that really textures Snape's character a bit more, to know that he has served as a slave of sorts, and is punishing himself for committing to the wrong Master. It should give him a lot of insight into how to treat and honor his own slave, which we see he is doing more and more. LOVED Harry's reaction to discovering this and I love that Snape is not really resentful of Harry because he feels it's the least he could do. I wonder if there is more to his story than what he's telling..I'm sure there is, because this is your story. I'm really enjoying this Snarry and I usually shudder at the thought of Snarry..lol. You're damned good. My favorite part was the intimacy of the crying scene, the way Snape was holding Harry's face, and the way you described Harry leaning into it. Harry's kiss was quite unexpected and just fab. I can't wait to see how this changes their relationship. It's obvious that the bond is growing stronger, but this bit of news and Harry's actions may quicken the results for both of them. AWESOME chapter!

YES!!! A whole new level indeed. I love how Harry is still struggling with his bond, and refuses to even think of it as a need...I wonder if it ever will feel like one for him....that would be pure yummyness : ) LOVED that Snape told him the kiss wasn't entirely unpleasant and that he's just being more open in genera but not to the point where it compromises his character. Can't wait to see his treatment of Harry now that Harry has confessed with his body and mouth that he wants to be a slave to him. Taken hard? hmmm

:::whimper:::: that was so deliciously agonizing...for both me and Harry. Wow. Damn Snape and his sexual delayed gratification techniques..that was some powerful stuff, I wonder if it will change the way Harry phrases things in the future..lol. OH, mama, that was fun to read. please do have Snape COME in the morning..for Harry's sake and mine...

Yay! 3 chapters! MORE MORE! *drolls*

Hahaha! Very smart Snape! I like your thinking! Thank you hun for updating! Your stories rock!

I loved the last line!
update!

Oh, these poor pumpkins!

I so love this story, more with every chapter.