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LOL@ Harry's last line about Umbridge's office! You're so funny...Interesting idea that a book can be cursed with dark magic to oblivate the reader....I wonder where Ron found the information about the Willow and now I'm dying to know what the hell this ingredient does...I hope it doesn't pose any danger to Harry, but it must be bad for it to be so obscure and protected.

That was quite lovely Emily. ::sigh::: Harry's first time and he did it the way he did to please Snape, he's been studying him close enough to know that that would make his day and that he let himself be taken like that is really...I don't know. That was just really intense the way you wrote it, I like that Harry wanted to see his face and looked up at him during the act. Now I'm wondering what Snape is hiding, is it the secret we all know from canon or something darker? And why does he eternally smell like October? I wonder how they will interact now that they've crossed this barrier...great chapter!

Wow, talk about being attuned to the Master's wishes. Way to go Harry!

Sev's secret must be a doozy...

More great chapters!

So good, Emily! Can't wait for more.

"You smell like October." ...I like that.

Odd ending. Now I'm very more intrigued about Severus' past.
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very good. i really like this story too and can't wait to read more.

Very good. really like this story

Strangely enough I LOVE the smell of fall... Like, it's probably one of my favorite "seasonal" smells right after the smell of blooming Westeria. :) LOVED these chapters!!