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oh, ouch, lol. That's one mystery solved. Interesting explanation ^^ keep going- you are amazing in the speed of your updates; i applaud you *nod nod*

AAAAAAh! Harry is going to be so torn. I am assuming that the slave bond won

this is really excellent. ive read several S/H stories with the master/slave-D/s dynamic, but youve managed to weave willingness and coercion, want and repulsion, guilt and duty, lust and love, salvation and damnation, together in a way i havent seen before in a story. (and trust me, ive read alot of 'em!!) VERY much looking forward to seeing how both harry and severus handle lucius' muddying of the waters, and if lucius asks for some, er, 'hospitality' from his host and how harry handles it. the imprinting spin was also very intriguing, both in severus' backstory and in how harry is going to handle it in terms of their relationship. the safety and peace he had is now, if not shattered, then bent and twisted into a parody of what it was just the night before. oh, and massive, major kudos for your vocabulary! cant wait to read the next few chapters!!!!

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Nice chapter
loved the last line, very intriguing
update!

Lucius is such a bastard (but no surprise there, really)
That wasn't too far off from what happened in canon (if my memory serves me correctly) since it was Snape who gave info to Voldie that enabled him to kill the Potters... right?
good chapter
eager for more!
update!

Oh no. Poor Harry! And poor Severus! And Lucius needs an appointment with that cane himself! I can't imagine what Severus is going to do to him...

Lovely tension here!

Harry is sooo wrong for that..lol. Nah, serves Dumbledork right : ) He is a manipulative bastard and Harry made some really good observations about the ease at which he acquired the potion. He's bold though, doing what he did in front of the Headmaster and McGonnagall..lol. LOVED the hair braiding into the rope trick, you'd be a awesome Domme, so creative : ) I hope their happiness lasts, I know something bad is coming though...

DAMN DAMN DAMN!!! How is he gonna overcome that?? Harry is pretty resilient and forgiving..but there are a few things he's really really stuck on and his parents' death is one of them. I wonder how this will impact the bond and if it will cause him mental anguish that he craves Snape's touch and control knowing what he knows...this is gonna be really interesting...

Ohh this is just to good Harry is slowly but surely becoming rather submissive I can't wait to read more and do find out about the wailing willow thing. Update soon please

@Ch.18. Cool spell, glad to see Harry still has some measure of power, and he's keeping Snape on his toes. Also very cool that Snape understands that the normal punishments will not work on Harry because of the abuse/neglect he suffered. It's rare you see this type of insight from a top in a fic where Harry is the bottom..as usual, you're showing your keen ability to use a character's background and characteristics to create a deeper relationship between characters that could interact in predictable ways, but you never let that happen. Can't wait what Snape's lastest insight will produce.