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for Bonds of Affection

by emilywaters

schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They have such a twisted relationship but its sweet! thanks for updating!
person qwerty
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter
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schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um...that was HOT!!! You're such a great BDSM writer...I can't tell you that enough. I most definitely think bond is in full effect now....wow...I do hope Lucius gets his though, and how the Willow plays into their relationship...oh wait..nevermind. Update soon...
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
@26. Interesting development, running into the Divinations teacher drinking in a bar. LOL. Harry seems resigned to death but I'm not buying it...he has to be misinterpreting the prophecy just like he did in canon right? Oh where is Snape? At least he understands his father was a git : p
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whoa...Snape telling Dumbledore to go fuck himself was quite unexpected yet it fits so well considering the humiliation Snape had to endure and Dumbledore's obvious liking of Potter. It's interesting he warned Snape about Lucius before....I wonder what that day dream was about with James at the end....it's so frustrating that Snape and Harry are prepared to die because of something that can't be changed or taken back..I hope they find each other soon.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I, really must say that your every reader's dream you up date regular and you don't hold stories hostage and to top that off your plot and story its self is simply brilliant thank you i like where this is going update soon
person Eve
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I'm so glad. I know they still have things to work out, but even putting the possibility of Harry's death as a result of straining the bond aside, the pull between the two of them is just too intense to keep them apart. Or so it seems to me. The last line is--as intended, I'm sure--immensely powerful. It shows that Harry is recognizing and voicing his acceptance of the bond. I was a bit worried that the dynamic would change and the power would shift, despite the bond, because of Severus' breakdown. Maybe it still will. Then again, with the bond's influence over Harry, I doubt he would be able to consciously hold that over Severus's head. It's late, I'm not sure I'm making any sense anymore. What it all comes down to: can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um, wow, that's all I have to say...what Snape did makes total sense...and I suppose Voldemort was pleased rather than pissed when he found out what Snape had done to Harry later? This revelation and Harry's forgiveness is going to cement their relationship...I don't even think Harry needed to take potion for this to happen, but I'm sure that it will make it only that much stronger. Now I'm a bit worried about the Willow thing.....please tell us what it is..it's killing me, lol.!
person Alaine
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still can't believe this was Severus' secret. It explains a lot though.. Anyway, I love the story. You've created passion, hatred, angst in each character. You've created forgiveness, despair and love. Absolutely beautiful, that are my final words. One more though, keep up the great work and update soon!
person chantalmalfoy
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Those were some intense chapters! I really hope Harry doesn't have to die. I hate death fics. :(