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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that they got some time together, that was much needed for all of them. That brand is interesting..I wonder if it will be related to the solution to this mess? I know you hardly ever introduce anything random...Ron took all of that very well I must say, he's really grown up a bit in this fic. Poor Hermione, the guilt, but really there weren't any options other than to let Severus die, and then Harry wouldn't have known the happiness he does now, however fleeting.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Umm may I say wow? This is getting intense.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was just WOW. It was amazingly erotic and sweet, a rare combination for me to see. I just loved how Harry and Severus completely abandoned themselves to the slave/master role but still in a loving relationship.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
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update!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the line: "If you ever want to see sunlight again" coming from Luna. I like that she's speaking to Severus in his dreams, giving him hints. I hope he picks up something useful from those hints...I'm getting a bit worried about the pending death of Harry...seems almost inevitable..unless he will be reborn like in DH? Loved Severus giving Harry power during sex and his explanation for it makes perfect sense. You just want them to be left alone and to enjoy each other...why can't Voldy do that? lol. I know he's coming for him soon...::sigh::
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, I especially liked the very end where Severus told Harry that he has known ownership & love but never together until now. ^_^ Great work, I can't wait for more!!
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was so deep....Harry's love has changed Severus' view of ownership...and has turned a sadist into a loving dominant. Not that they can't be, but as far as Severus is concerned, I'm sure they weren't the same before Harry. Your use of description puts us right there with Harry, the doubt, the anticipation, the terror, the longing....you're so damn good at this. Once they get through whatever hell is coming, please please return back to the Chamber : )
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May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story
i'm happy i found it
having a seizure in my seat, excited about what will happen next. lol.
i'm happy i found it
having a seizure in my seat, excited about what will happen next. lol.
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow chapter 39 was just WOW. I dont know if its the potions doing that to Harry or Harry just wanting it because of Severur or maybe it's both but what Harry did was truly intense/ I just loved how Severus is slowly losing control of his desire to dominate but this have control on what he does to Harry
Your writing seems to have changed in the past few chapters, it just became more pronounced in this latest one. It's not bad or anything, your writing just changed tone but it did give a nice effect to this current chapter
Your writing seems to have changed in the past few chapters, it just became more pronounced in this latest one. It's not bad or anything, your writing just changed tone but it did give a nice effect to this current chapter
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May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!
The most evil place to leave off at! Humph, the bond is at full force, non?
Great chapter
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The most evil place to leave off at! Humph, the bond is at full force, non?
Great chapter
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