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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really have to say this, I love the way you write. I have read your other stories with Harry and Draco and truly enjoyed them. I just happen to find this one and I have enjoyed every minute of reading.
LadyNightVamp
LadyNightVamp
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Only 2 more chapters till ole Voldie appears? Ack!
Great chapter!
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Great chapter!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. especiously the tombstone.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Review for chapters 41 & 42
Wow everything seems so sureal. It's like Harry isnt going to die when he turns 17, your writing makes one forget about that unless you reminded them of it at the end of those chapters, hell I really did forget about that part. As I said before I love how you can make Severus's and Harry's love making be both very erotic and sweet. And Rons reactions to hearing what Harry and Severus might be doing is so funny.
Keep up the wonderful work
Wow everything seems so sureal. It's like Harry isnt going to die when he turns 17, your writing makes one forget about that unless you reminded them of it at the end of those chapters, hell I really did forget about that part. As I said before I love how you can make Severus's and Harry's love making be both very erotic and sweet. And Rons reactions to hearing what Harry and Severus might be doing is so funny.
Keep up the wonderful work
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. well written
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me smile and at times laugh. LOL@Snape's insistence that Harry convince him to keep the tongue piercing. Harry with a pierced tongue sounds so hot. Ron and Hermione are kickass in this story..and I'm glad Harry has them. I love how natural Harry and Snape seem to fit...that's hard to do missy IMO. Too bad it's drawing to an end..but maybe not a true end hmm?
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really must say that I am truly enjoying this story. It is so achingly beautiful at times ... depthy and lovely, really. I love your characterisations. Harry is exactly as I would imagine him in such a situation. I am sure he carries great insecurity. How could he not, as he was raised by wolves ... hateful woves, at that. Snape is, shall we say, Himself. But, I see him in this story as he would be when falling in love. (We saw his capacity for love in the memories in DH. It broke him, confirming my theory that the power of love is a very serious thing.)
I think you handle the slavery issue quite well. The scenes in which Harry submits are neither trite nor gratuitous. You take the issue quite seriously, and you weave it into a story that is both believable and compelling ... yes, that is the word ... compelling. I can really see a relationship like this as valid and full of potential. I am saying this badly, I suppose. But, I am just that touched.
Thank you for writing this story. I look forward to the rest of it ... anxiously.
I think you handle the slavery issue quite well. The scenes in which Harry submits are neither trite nor gratuitous. You take the issue quite seriously, and you weave it into a story that is both believable and compelling ... yes, that is the word ... compelling. I can really see a relationship like this as valid and full of potential. I am saying this badly, I suppose. But, I am just that touched.
Thank you for writing this story. I look forward to the rest of it ... anxiously.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Response to Jilliane's question:
1)When Ron is asking the question, he wants to know what Harry is feeling - what are the feelings that urged him to agree to the brand.
2) Harry's response is confusing and ambiguous, and at this point it is meant to be. So... they all know that voldemort's potion creates an imperceptible bond that feels like it's genuinely a part of the person. it should be impossible to tell the difference between the bond's urges and one's own feelings. Hermione wonders whether Harry might have been a true submissive, even before the slave-bond, but Harry says no. he believes he could have never had truly submissive feelings for anyone else - just for Severus.
The rest is mean to be ambiguous, however this conversation is meant to be important...
3) The brand isn't a plot device. It's just a symbol of ownership that's all. ironically, it's probably the only thing that isn't a plot device... ; )
1)When Ron is asking the question, he wants to know what Harry is feeling - what are the feelings that urged him to agree to the brand.
2) Harry's response is confusing and ambiguous, and at this point it is meant to be. So... they all know that voldemort's potion creates an imperceptible bond that feels like it's genuinely a part of the person. it should be impossible to tell the difference between the bond's urges and one's own feelings. Hermione wonders whether Harry might have been a true submissive, even before the slave-bond, but Harry says no. he believes he could have never had truly submissive feelings for anyone else - just for Severus.
The rest is mean to be ambiguous, however this conversation is meant to be important...
3) The brand isn't a plot device. It's just a symbol of ownership that's all. ironically, it's probably the only thing that isn't a plot device... ; )
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That metaphor with the sunlight was really beautiful.
Great chapter!
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Great chapter!
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. so sweet. excellent work hun.