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for Bonds of Affection

by emilywaters

person T.S.M
schedule October 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this story was brilliant.

i was wondering what were the names of the sings you used tho?
person TRUgrit
schedule June 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't stop reading this story. It's such an amazing incredible piece. Thank you for this! It made me laugh and cry and words can't even describe how much I love this story. Thank you thank you thank you! !
person trin
schedule May 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this story over the last two days... you have done an excellent job and I'm glad you posted the deleted scenes... it helped to tie up some kinda loose ends and gave me a smile. Excellent job, beautiful writing voice, and great premises for your original pieces.
schedule February 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read this story in a couple of years so I decided to indulge myself. It has to be one of my all time favorite fanfiction stories ever. You're a brilliant writer. I ran through a plethora of emotions throughout this story, all of them stunning in their intensity. Thank you for writing!
schedule January 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok honestly when i started reading this story i was interested, then i saw the number of chapters thinking how can a good story go on for nearly 80 chapters? boy was i ever proved wrong. This story was amazing, beautiful and heart wrenching. The dynamics of the sub/master relationship were done with a beauty that can only be done by someone who doesn't believe that Master/Sub is a fucked up thing, but something that can be born out of love and need. I was pleasantly surprised at this entire story and fell in love with your writing style. Thank you for writing such a beautiful story and I am very glad i actually stopped to read it.
person Teleen
schedule December 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for writing! :)
person dime
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
It seems the pivotal chapter (71) is broken. It starts, oddly, with the incomplete sentence "by Williamson, Kingsley and Tonks." If you have time to fix that, it would be appreciated.
- Dime
person dime
schedule November 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's still nearly as good reading it the second time. ^^
Even though the mystery of the Wailing Willow is gone, even though I know the story will end well - it's still exciting, extremely hot, funny, and just plain wonderful to read. I love the imagery you put into some of the scenes, like the storm in the greenhouse. And I adore how you describe Harry's way into his role. It's never quite clear whether he is consenting of his own free will - even when the potion is taken out of the equation, there's still the Horcrux - but, oh my god, is he having fun doing it. ;D
Some things feel odd to me, like how you often skip pronouns (tongue doing this, hand touching that). But overall, the story is really well-told and a great pleasure to read. I seem to remember last reading it on HPFandom, though; why is it gone?
- Dime
person sarahsezlove
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was totally wonderful from start to finish.

Thank you so much for sharing.
schedule July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was an absolutely amazing tale. I loved every aspect of it! The potion, and omg i so did not see that coming. Amazingly written. Thanks for sharing!