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for Bonds of Affection

by emilywaters

person Anon
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are simply eeeevil!!! Leaving us all hanging right there! "and he uttered the spell..." Gah!!! you must finish! I demand it! and if you do i shall send you lots and lots of cookies!! Here take one *gives a chocolate chip cookie* it's yummy and I have more!! So please please please finish!!
~ Waits impatiently
person SoftObsidian74
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE Eddie Vedder : ) I knew you were cool...lol. and YES you brought Snape back...This whole Luna as a part of his mind is fascinating..and I'm wondering why Luna..are you gonna ever reveal that? I love it whenever she's talking..it's so haunting and beautiful and we know it's key to the story in some way...the riddles she drops are spell binding...so glad Hermione's in his corner...LOL@Ron asking if he wanted Lucius dead like it was working a Mandrake...I hope this tranfiguration thing works..and thank god the bond between Sev. and Voldy is broken...that offers a lot of hope in itself....
person qwerty
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Luna (rather, the fragment of Severus mind that's familiar with death) so much in this story!
update!
person qwerty
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Evil cliffhanger!
Great chapter though. Severus has endured so much... to put it lightly.
update!
person munchkin
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH!!! i can't wait for more! this is a great story. keep it coming!
person Selera
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is amazing!
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please don't let snape die. please!!!!
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh all the excitement yes this is so good I love the gps tracking it cracked me up. Harry lojack lol. So where is our dear Severus hopefully it is someplace of answers. update soon please
person cravedom
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pardon my lack of class but I have to say that: THIS IS SOME EXCITING SHIT! Good lord girl where does it come from? It must be a wonderful thing to have such an imagination. I hope you always have something to write and that we are always lucky enough to get to read it.
person becca
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story. You've got me completely hooked. If it's not too much trouble, could you maybe find a way to keep Harry and Severus alive? Couldn't the splinters in his fingers anchor his soul or perhaps attract the termination ingredient ... or something?? Please. He just escaped from being buried alive. It'd be such a shame to kill him now.