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for Bonds of Affection

by emilywaters

schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like it when I can't predict where a story is going to go. So, with that said, I really like your story. You are a very good writer and that, more than anything, is probably what kept me reading your story. I hope that Harry doesn't die; that would be so sad for everyone (especially Sev). But I understand if that's where the story decides to go.
I have to say that I definitely like the odd sort of duality that went on with Draco. At least, it seems like duality to me. It kinda bugs me when people make him wholly evil or all wimpy and good.
Anyway, I look forward to seeing where this story goes to its end.
Keep up the great work!
person Selera
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Bows to the author* Please next chapter! PLEASE!
person magentah
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Emily, seriously, that is a /great/ twist. ..You know, as long as Harry lives and all. (Though if I'm going to be honest, it's a great twist even if he doesn't live. But that's no excuse to go killing him off!) I am so impressed with the way this has all come together and, despite being a completely different plot line from JKR's HP stories, with the way it flows so well with canon. See? I'm so impressed that I can't type nice, grammatically correct sentences!

Oh wait, no.. that's just nerves. I feel like I'm worrying myself into a panic attack over Harry's survival. :\
person Ellanath
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the most methodical, well thought out, logic convincing chapter. What a twist, new view, of the story we all know. This has clearly been one of my most favorite story of all time. You, are one awesome writer.
person SoftObsidian74
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! You're bloody brilliant!!! That makes so much damn sense it doesn't make sense!!! Amazing how you took canon and twisted it to work for this story in such a way that it COULD BE canon if JKR had wrote it herself. I knew you always had a plan...but I was not expecting this at all! I LOVE that Snape's soul is in Harry...and probably will always be...unless the Fiendfyre gets him....this is so sexy and romantic and wow....that's nuts! If only Snape had told Dumbledore sooner...but I understand why he didn't. Wow...and then there's the prophecy that had the truth embedded in it all along! Genius! lol. This is your best story hands down...I mean I really cherish The Lion and the Serpent, but you really masterminded this and executed it perfectly. Bravo Emily!
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*shriek* GOGOGOGOGOGOGO!

I love this story. It's such great reading. I'm so glad I have it bookmarked on the other site.
person kc
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You ave no idea what you do to me, this is the most amazing story. It has me jumping up and down from excitment and nerves, will Harry still be alive when they get there? I can't wait till the next chapter, please continue soon!
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do believe this is one of the best HP/SS fics, and you also hold the proud title of being the author that made me turn away from HPDD (briefly) in take HPSS into my life. Please update, I cannot wait to find out what happens next!
xxx
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dum dum duuuuummm! Wow, I feel really stupid for not seeing that Harry is *Snape's* Horcrux! So simple, yet so elegant... Bravo! Am now back on the edge of my seat awaiting the next update ^_^
person qwerty
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!
You just blew EVERYONE'S mind with that last chapter!!!
That was insane the way that you tied that together!!!
Best chapter yet!
update!!!!!!!