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An excellent tale! Thank you for the time and effort that was put into the story, to make it enjoyable for everyone. Kudos and props to you!

 

excuse me.Can I translate your work  into Chinese?I will note your name and website if you want. Looking forward to your response

fabulous story, glad I stumbled across it. Well thought out, well written.

That story was outstanding! I truly enjoyed it. you're fantastic and creative author.

No such thing as emancipation in the UK, and it's not necessary anyway: everywhere in the UK you can marry at 16 (except Northern Ireland, where it's 17) and in Scotland you don't need parental permission to do so.

I read this entire story in under 12 hours, smh, I could not stop!! It goes without saying, but I loved it!

Okay, I know I came to the party a couple (*cough* 6+ *cough*) years late, but I just read this awesome story and I had to say something about it. Seriously, I LOVED this story! You have a true talent. I've started a few HP Snarry stories myself (none that I will post publically right know; I don't have that much confidence), but your story was beyond what I have even dreamed. Twists and turns, secrets and surprises - I could not predict the ending and on of the things I pride myself on is my ability to solve mysteries. I felt like Hermione in regards to the potion. Was it real? Was it a fake? Real. Fake. Real. Fake. I went back and forth and I did not see the Horcrux thing coming either. Now i'm going to go read some (probably all) of your other stories!

I normally love your stories, but I'm finding this one a bit irritating, both because of the fanon idea that Snape gives out lots of detentions (prior to the Sectumsempra incident at the end of HBP, we see him give out just seven detentions in six years, only two of them to Harry, while McGonagall gives out twenty-two, seven of them to Harry) and because of the cultural anomalies. There's no such thing as legal emancipation in Britain and in any case it wouldn't be an issue, as Harry is old enough to marry at sixteen, and in Scotland he doesn't even need parental consent to do so. It's not legal for a teacher to have sex with a student under eighteen unless they are married to them, but Harry leaving school would solve that, yes.

Thanks a lot for this beautiful fanfic! I really enjoyed it! I started to read it and I couldn't stop. Your a great writer, you can keep the atention on the story. It makes me cry and be scary about what was happening. I love this kind of stories.
Then, thanks again for give us, the readers a very great wrote story.
I'm sorry for my English, it is not my birth language. And even I could read your fic very easily that is other gift a good writer has.

Just finished the story. Great stuff! Loved the ending, and the deleted scenes. Loved everything! Good job, and thank you for sharing your gift:)