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for The Perfect Family

by Ivellis

schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update agian soon. Thanks.
person GLCW2
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I figure that Petunia isn't the horse-faced hag as she is in the books. I would wait until the kids are at least 15 or so before adding in an adult. Between themselves, start whenever. I personally think that 9 is a little young but I can always incorporate a different age when I read it. Keep up the good writing. I hope to see more soon.
schedule April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it hope u write more soon
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this, I really like. It has appeal. Keep up the good work!

Tom
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A nice fic. Keep it Harry centric please. Nice theme.
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good Idea!!
Update Soon
person Texan
schedule April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Can't wait to see how pimpin Harry becomes.
person Dragen
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a great start to the story, I can't wait to see what happens next, PLEASE update soon. Could email me when you do.
person sanda
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
me liken alot