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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

person gummibands
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I say us readers will have to get combative. (cocks marines helmet to the side, tosses combat potion in hand up and down, grins back)....we move at dawn....
person cnor9602
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really really want that next chapter. Gotta know what happens next.
person kalush
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Nanashi
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh No you Don't..:::Kid Naps Muse and Holds her/him for Rasume::: Finish the story or never see your Muse again :::Laughs Evilly::: I hate Cliffy's and I want MORE PLEASE ::Still holding Muse hostage though:::
person qwerty
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome punishment... though I don't like the fact that Severus has nightmares about it :(
Great job! I hope Severus regains his magic back!
What happened to all the eyewitnesses?
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh what a great chapter! Evil Woods is back but poor sev
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay luna came!
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, I hope the happy ending is coming. :-) They have fought so hard and both have been through so much...

Love the writing!
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it!!
Go Snape!! Oh the meeting between sev and woods was great ^^
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i so hope that harry got sev with child and i hope that they leave happy im so glad he killed wood