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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

person KaeXLi
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please do not hold the next chapter. see im reviewing! la la la i love this fic update soom lala la
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brings out cave troll with orders to harm, kidnap and "lose" the muse, if chapter is with held. That would be very not nice, since leaving us with finally a glimps of Harry but no knowledge of what he has been going through is just mean. Excellent update, poor Snape. Thanks for sharing. (Cave troll holds club threateningly) ;)
person kunitsu
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Harry and Severus's meeting was sweet in it's own way. Now I wonder who that Auror was

Now about that last few chapters, dont you bloody dare hold them hostage or I will set up camp and create a strike near your computer until you do. So post it up ok
person anon
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Maybe the confusion is because chapter 21 says: "Luna, being a formal lover --" Must be a typo then, but a confusing one.
person Selera
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONONO! Need it need it need it! PLEASE!
person Phoenix
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me while I take several deep breaths .... I have to say, I absolutely love this story, although the cliffhangers you leave each chapter on is killing. Please, please, please, please, PLEASE! don't hold the next chapter hostage, I've been waiting several chapters to see my favourite two boys together, and how Severus recovers his magic ... because I know you can't really be thinking about ending this story on anything but a happy ending ... but there is a part of me that wonders....
Ok, I'm definitely babbling here, so please put me out of my misery and don't hold the next chapter hostage ... please???
person anon
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank goodness. The chapters are fast but the wait seemed long. Lovely ending to this segment.
person SoftObsidian74
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
If you hold the final chapter hostage, you will have a mob on your hands deary, and I will stalk you and badger you ever chance I get! I can't believe this story is ending...it just doesn't seem right. I love how you write Sev, he's so open, vulnerable, yet resilient. Poor Harry, he needs some TLC and a lot of rest I think...I hope you're considering continuing this story in some way, maybe a sequel or I don't know....don't end it OK? And for God's sake don't hold the last chapter hostage!
person Fairner
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol hostages? i thought the deal was take no prisoners? XD well i liked the ending of this chapter it was really sweet ^_^ i think severus did the best thing he could by walking up to harry =)
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeek! You couldn't possibly! :-)

The story has just gotten better and better and I am so happy that Harry and Severus are together again. I look forward to your final chapter(s) with great anticipation, they are always a bright spot in my day.

Thanks again.