AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Snape FAINTED!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUNNY AS HELL!!!!!!!!
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I luffs it!!! *huggles fic* Great job.
person Darkless
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I'm sorry I didn't find this fic until now, I would have been a faithful reviewer. This definitely fed my angst-beast. Thank you for sharing your talent.
person QueenB
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9 An excellent chapter, filled with tension and desire and the hint of things to come. I loved that kissing scene between Harry and Severus. A little tease for the readers never come amiss and heightens anticipation wonderfully. I also liked Harry giving his first order for Severus to be bathed. Hey, I wonder if that will be in the next chapter? I'm hoping so.
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The idea, the writing, the ... I'm not sure what it was, but this is one of my all time favorite stories!!! The idea of adding to this story with a threesome (even a oneshot) does not appeal to me, it doesn't mean I won't read it, but it doesn't appeal. I love threesomes, and moresomes, just not with this particular story. They tried and fought so hard to have this relationship, that adding someone else is a little hard to take.

Oh well, that is my choice, not yours. I would love to read a true threesome from you, from beginning to end!! Let us know when!!!!!!
person QueenB
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5 I have to admit I was nervous when Snape insisted on being in the room alone with Ron. He had attempted to bait Harry into revealing something in the previous chapter. That failed but he was able to goad Ron. Still, both Gryffindors surprised him by not telling him what he needed to know.

Hermione points out here what is Severus's major flaw with people in general and Harry in particular. He places so much emphasis on book learning he doesn't understand people at all. He's led such an insular life he can only peg people into categories and relate to them as such: Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Slytherin, Hufflepuff. His first reaction is to think the worst of people--their thoughts, actions, motives--and this causes him to underestimate them in certain cases.

Like most intellectuals, he thinks he knows best and everyone around him is a blithering idiot. Someone once said that the mistakes of intelligent people do a lot more damage than the mistakes of stupid people because they are so unexpected. Severus's mistakes have been doozies and Harry's have been nothing by comparison.

I hope Hermione has a good laugh at his expense when he comes to.
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
haha that was an amazing fic! So sad to see it come to an end, there are very few Harry/Sev pairings - aka. Harry being the dominate one. But it was great to read! Thank you for sharing and better yet, finishing this fic!
person Jan
schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story... but... never mind! I cant wait to for your one shot sequel! ^_~

Jan

schedule September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I so looked forward to coming on and finding this updated every few weeks. It is sad to see that it is at an end though all good things must come to an end with time.
I would truely love to be added to your alert list. If you can not see my address it is sakadec1502@yahoo.com.
Keep up the wonderful work.
person qwerty
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story! One of the best Snarry out there!
Loved the ending!
Can't wait for the epilogue!