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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So I am eagerly waiting for your next update... Update soon.
KP
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Amorals fight their mates just prior to the first sexual encounter to determine sexual dominance."

Fabulous idea!^^ I cant wait to see that!
person Selera
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear oh dear oh dear. More please?
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was a different side to sev. i liked it. update soon please.
person Mikra
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I can't wait for your next update! :)
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good story.i love bond stories than slave stories.but i must say i dont like kingsley.i guess he still loves snape.this could be dangerous for snape and harry relations.i hope im wrong
person Selera
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey I wasn't planning to.. I was just going to demand the next chapter ASAP!
person sanda
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, well we could hit you with vegetables, or something else
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hands are not for hitting! ROFL!

No way, this is great! And cliffhangers get the adrenaline flowing!
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*flops down in front of fire and offers marshmallows* see not hitting. very good story idea, very well written. can't wait to read more. *holds out marshmallows again* you want some or not?