rate_review Reviews

no reason to go all 'MOM' on me, here's you review. i love the looooong chapter, truly, it was a joy to read. today has been a prissy day. i've been peppered with articles about Dom/Sub relationships and they all say, in one form or another "it's abuse!" and it's ticking me off, because the cases they describe IS abuse, where the dom misuses the trust he/she has been given - any way, they imly that ALL d/S relationships are like that and it is ANNOYING. it was a great relief to see that someone actually has gotten it right on the spike of what is should be. thank you.

~ extraho

a very strong plot i like how you have sev and harry staying true to themselves but i just want them to come together soon and work out their relationship good job update soon are should i say more please

good long chapter, can't wait to see how Harry and Severus handle the relationship as well as Severus's thrall.

sorry i havent reviewed til now, i hate signing in. anyway, a nitpick:
Harry began moving to his left before he stopped and turned around to face Severus. His motions were almost mechanical. Something was off.

loved it!

Love it!

*pushes bag of popcorn under your couch*

love the story. *runs back to read the rest*

oh i do hope you have not stopped this fic i love it!
wow ... haha i love submissive Sev ^__^

oh this sounds so freaking cool!

oh loving your fic ^__^

cool, I like it