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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful but you have to promise me that Harry finds out the truth whether or not he cares is a different point just as long as he finds out the truth. Pwease? Pwetty Pwease?
person ChaosProphet
schedule May 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh wow, that was pure hotness. nothing like a knock-down, dragged-out fight to get the libido up. severus' submission was perfect - the desire to submit and the need to have that submission earned. cant wait for ch 11!!!!!
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I really liek your story. It's a grat idea you had there.
Update soon.
Phoebe
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good, have a kind of feeling and flow to the story. Good character-portrays, I love subSeverus, you made my day. Thanks and hope to see more
schedule May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has to be one of my favorite stories thus far. It's extremely unique not to mention hot. ^_~ I can't wait for you to update again.
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love this story. *Leaves you cookies and milk* i hope your little one gets well.
person Anon
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice! this so freakin exciting! i was about to have a heart-attack knowing about him and luna. but then i read on and it was explained, and i felt better. well, my boyfriends callin...cant wait to read more!!!
person sanda
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omggg. i lovee it. the tension between harry and severus is magnifique. i am salivating over here. the kiss was sooo hottttt. i need more. please update quickly before i get an anxiety attack from not seeing anymore fabulous chapters. ps - SEX
person Selera
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
........................................................................ WOW! Okay that was a lovely chapter. So much in it.. so much to digest.. yet leaves me wanting more! I hope everything goes well with your son so you can update again soon.