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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Harry should finally mark Severus, but chose something they are both fond of. Like a serpent and a lion deeply kissing... Lol, the mental image of anybody kissing a snake!
person kunitsu
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay I finally get to review. I have been reading this story for a while now and I just love it. I usually stop reading a story when I find out that Severus is the bottom but something in this story just made me keep on reading it. The sex scenes are really hot and kinky, Severus's emotions are so real and Harry's reactions to that are well placed. All in all this is just an amazing story
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my that was hot so hot i hope that harry and sev decided to have a baby soon please upsate soon
person qwerty
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
Can't wait to know what the other gifts are!
person qwerty
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!
person Hine
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So hot!!! <3 Usually I'm a sub!Harry fan, but the way you write sub!Severus is incredible! I need more <3
person Coldfire
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Keep posting, it is a good story even if the chapters seem short. You also do a nice job when you talk about each character even if they do not exactly match JKR's books.
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story. I like that Harry was at first reluctant to bond with Severus, and that they had real issues to deal with. Wonderful writing. I would love to read more.
person Kris
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow great story. it had me hooked from the start
person Jan
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was HOT!!!

I absolutely love this story, can't wait for chapter 16 to be posted ^_^

Jan