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OH. MY. GOD.

I think that Wood is going to be so dead that they're going to have to mop him up with two-ply paper towels, and I don't think that Harry or Sev should do it. I think Luna should show just what kind of a witch she REALLY is.

I'm on my way to vote.

What the hell! ARGH!!! *growls* I want Percy's punishment to be as slow and devious as what he did to Sev. But MUCH worse!

Public humiliation. Yes
Quick and easy death. NOO!
Lifetime residency at St. Mungo's to contemplate that he'll never measure up to Sev. Yes!
Serious damage done to Percy's private anatomy courtesy of everyone's favorite Potions Master. YESS!!
Hot sex scene after everything's taken care of. Hell Yeah!

I read the comments on your livejournal from others about how to deal with Percy. I think the drainage of magic from Percy would be most apt. But maybe Sev can find a way to do that, and then take the magic for himself? That would be awesome!
Great chapter!

Oliver Wood that sick and twisted BAS--Illegitimate child word!!! Grrr and his powers are stronger now too I hope Harry can control his Amoral heritage and still see Severus instead of that jerk Wood and decide to kill that bugger! lolz Well now that I've got that off my chest I feel better...Reading that chapter pissed me of more than I already was lol I've been chasing flies around the house and boy are they fast XD well keep up the good work! I hope Luna is able to pressure Web into telling her and she shows up at the store and save the day! lolz ^_~

Oh, you've got to give it to Oliver, he sure did think things through. Poor Severus, hope he's able to get the antidote done on time! What's Harry going to do once he learns what Oliver's been up to these past few months?

Please update chapter 20 soon ^_^

Jan

Cunning very cunning indeed. I never thought Wood would think of something like that. very nicely done. Now I cant wait to see what Harry and Luna will do to Wood once they find out what he did to Severus that is if Severus doesnt kill him first

O.O wow ok i have to say that was one of the most brilliant snarry fic's i've ever had the pleasure of reading. I never would have thought of Snape being such a sexy submissive (who knew he could be such a cock slut?) usually Harry is cast into that role. I really like how you hinted at some of the bondage acts that went on between the two of them. sometimes all you need is a suttle hint. Your ideas for their magical creature inheritance was very exciting. I really hope you postanother chapter very soon i'm looking forward to it especially with how you ended 18. I really hope Harry lets Snape do something rather nasty to Wood useing his thrall. by the way what is fletching? i was really hoping you would give a hint as to what it was.

I love this story and you seem to have a real talent with drawing things down and then at the last minute throwing a twist into the story to make it all the more interesting to read over and over again.

Yes, I

As requested here a short review. I do not usually like to read Dom/Sub stories but lets just say with the amount of time it takes to write stories and at the rate I'm going while reading there is just not enough material around so I do end up trying to read these every once in a while and I have to say I am very impressed with your story. It usually makes me queasy to think of someone giving up complete control, but you have managed to portray their relationship as more of an equal one where both have the aditional benefit of having their more special emotional need (taking care of someone/being cared for) met. I am truely enjoying your story, please keep going!

Great story! I kove gow you write your smut. I can't wait till the next chapter, I see pain in Wood's future.