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for A Most Trusted Soldier

by Rettavex

person Fairner
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
o.O my heart was a bit aching when sev was deciding to run away for harry. also that's a very disturbing dream. XD
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
snape and luna.i hate it.snape fallen in love harry but now? harry left but snape dont care.i realy don't like new chapter
person kunitsu
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow chapter 20-22 were just something else. I do hope Severus's magic will be enough for Harry's amoral heritage. I am curious as to what Harry is doing now
person kunitsu
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow chapter 20-22 were just something else. I do hope Severus's magic will be enough for Harry's amoral heritage. I am curious as to what Harry is doing now
person SoftObsidian74
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Emily told me to come over here and read this and WOW....your writing is most impressive....I'm sorta speechless...even the horrific scenes are just really beautifully written. The D/s stuff is just unbelievably hot, even when it's cruel/brutal. This is just great story telling....makes me look at Snape and Luna in a totally different way...and Harry? RAWR!!
person moonofthesea
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I am sad to see it come to an end.But by the same token a am glad that you stuck with it. So many unfinished fanfics out there. Thanks for the great ride.
person anon
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bless you for one of the best revenge scenes ever. Yet it seems impossible that Harry will be left in peace, elf law or not. Is Severus ever going to feel secure in this relationship? I would have thought public revenge would cement the committment, with or without the bond. I love the bond symbol, by the way.
person Nanashi
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
::Leaves rose's and Cherries For Muse and Arthor with a note::More Please
person Haru
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My Gosh!!! What will happen now??
I was almost giving up Snarry, but you got me hooked in this couple again!
Awsome writing, story and plot, you gave the "magical no-human Harry" a new face, thanks a lot!
person ficklefeline
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm seriously on my tippytoes in anticipation of the next chappy. but i think Luna should have gotten to yell at Hermione a lot more and then have Harry yell at her later after taking care of Severus. I hope Wood gets whats coming to him soon and where did Harry take severus?